Winning Essays

Eight students share the Common App essay that helped get them into their top choice school.

  • “I plan to pursue Public Policy, so Big Green helped me craft an essay about how I discovered my passion for serving low-income communities.”

    Thomas (Brown)

  • “I think my essay is a good example of how common everyday experiences can shape us in profound ways.”

    — Chloe (Notre Dame)

  • “Big Green helped me define my personal narrative as someone who wants to combine tech-based entrepreneurship with environmental conservation.”

    — Benicio (Stanford)

  • “Big Green helped me talk about my signature high school achievement in a way that was fun and accessible — but above all — deeply personal.”

    — Saanvi (MIT)

  • “Big Green gave me the confidence to be myself in my essays and I think that authenticity really shines through.”

    — Alexa (UVA, full merit scholarship)

  • “I wanted to write about something that few others would dare to write about—so I picked garbage.”

    — Peter (Yale)

  • “Win or lose, my goal was to stand out in the insanely competitive admissions process and not blend in with the herd.”

    — Casey (Duke)

  • “My academic record was inconsistent, so Big Green helped me tell my story in a way that was both compelling and memorable.”

    — Adil (UC Berkeley)

Some names and images were changed for privacy.