Winning Essays
Eight students share the Common App essay that helped get them into their top choice school.
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“I plan to pursue Public Policy, so Big Green helped me craft an essay about how I discovered my passion for serving low-income communities.”
— Thomas (Brown)
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“I think my essay is a good example of how common everyday experiences can shape us in profound ways.”
— Chloe (Notre Dame)
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“Big Green helped me define my personal narrative as someone who wants to combine tech-based entrepreneurship with environmental conservation.”
— Benicio (Stanford)
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“Big Green helped me talk about my signature high school achievement in a way that was fun and accessible — but above all — deeply personal.”
— Saanvi (MIT)
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“Big Green gave me the confidence to be myself in my essays and I think that authenticity really shines through.”
— Alexa (UVA, full merit scholarship)
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“I wanted to write about something that few others would dare to write about—so I picked garbage.”
— Peter (Yale)
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“Win or lose, my goal was to stand out in the insanely competitive admissions process and not blend in with the herd.”
— Casey (Duke)
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“My academic record was inconsistent, so Big Green helped me tell my story in a way that was both compelling and memorable.”
— Adil (UC Berkeley)
Some names and images were changed for privacy.